Gold
These are ok poems. When I read them, I don't hear nails sliding across a chalkboard.The Gold one is about Zeus in Greek Mythology. I'm no Homer so bear with me.
The second one is a love poem about what it is to hold the love of your life.
Tell me what you think they are about!
Blayac lightly illustrated this page. I think it was due to the full page picture that preceded this page. I think it works.
[BLAYAC: Joe is correct about the reason behind me lightly illustrating this page. Though I don't think this art is necessarily bad I don't think it's all that interesting either. It's interesting to look back on these pictures I drew over a decade ago and see how far I've come.]
posted by joe at 1:10 PM
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I like "the cure". It's succinct.
I'm trying my hand writing about food, and did a little one on peppermint ice-cream, but writing about food was tougher than I thought
saffron- Thank you! Keep working on it! Don't give up!
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